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Ten Do’s and Don’ts when it comes to admission essays!!!!

Posted by saintdeb on December 24, 2007

The Do’s

  • Unite your essay and give it direction with a theme or thesis. The thesis is the main point you want to communicate.
  • Before you begin writing, choose what you want to discuss and the order in which you want to discuss it.
  • Use concrete examples from your life experience to support your thesis and distinguish yourself from other applicants.
  • Write about what interests you, excites you. That’s what the admissions staff wants to read.
  • Start your essay with an attention-grabbing lead — an anecdote, quote, question, or engaging description of a scene.
  • End your essay with a conclusion that refers back to the lead and restates your thesis.
    Revise your essay at least three times.
  • In addition to your editing, ask someone else to critique your statement of purpose for you.
  • Proofread your personal statement by reading it out loud or reading it into a tape recorder and playing back the tape.
  • Write clearly, succinctly.

The Don’ts

  • Don’t include information that doesn’t support your thesis.
  • Don’t start your essay with “I was born in…,” or “My parents came from…”
  • Don’t write an autobiography, itinerary, or résumé in prose.
  • Don’t try to be a clown (but gentle humor is OK).
  • Don’t be afraid to start over if the essay just isn’t working or doesn’t answer the essay question.
  • Don’t try to impress your reader with your vocabulary.
  • Don’t rely exclusively on your computer to check your spelling.
  • Don’t provide a collection of generic statements and platitudes.
  • Don’t give mealy-mouthed, weak excuses for your GPA or test scores.
  • Don’t make things up.

Well, these are a few quick guidelines friends!!! Am putting them down here again as the applications are at their peak!!! Also do note that I have already addressed the essay writing techniques and related issues in few of my previous posts….so happy reading!!!

Source: http://www.accepted.com/

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Essay Editing!!!!

Posted by saintdeb on December 20, 2007

Well friends…….with the intention of doing something meaningful (and also to try and earn some good will before the results!!!!), I have decided to start an essay editing service. Those interested can contact me by simply going to the essay-editing page (navigation bar) and putting in a comment with the intent along with a mail id.
btw….the above mentioned service is free of charge!!! And though I would refrain from bragging about my own essay editing skills (I don’t profess of having any!!!), but would definitely try and implement the things that I have learned in the past few months to finetune the essays!!!

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